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BPashalearningEnglish · Unit 1
Year 2 · Baccalaureate

Persuasive Writing

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الموضوع Why are teenagers more affected by social media than others

Why do teenagers seem more affected by social media than many adults? Adolescence is a period in which identity, confidence, and friendships are still developing. As a result, online approval may feel very important, and a low number of likes can sometimes be interpreted as rejection. Teenagers also tend to compare themselves with carefully selected photos and achievements, which may significantly affect their self-image. In addition, many platforms are designed to keep users engaged through constant notifications and rapidly changing content. This can make it difficult for some teenagers to control their screen time or concentrate on schoolwork. However, social media does not harm every teenager in the same way. It can provide friendship, information, and creative opportunities when it is used thoughtfully. Parents and schools could therefore help teenagers develop healthier habits by discussing online pressure, checking sources, and setting reasonable limits. With guidance and balance, young people may enjoy the benefits of social media while reducing its possible risks.

Why do teenagers seem...

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Rhetorical question

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يجذب الانتباه ويقدم الموضوع

may feel can sometimes tend to

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Hedging

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يمنع التعميم ويضبط اليقين

very important significantly affect

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Intensifiers

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يقوي الفكرة دون تكديس

does not harm every teenager

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Balanced qualification

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يعترف بالاختلافات

It can provide friendship...

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Counterpoint

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يعرض الجانب الإيجابي

could therefore help may enjoy

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Measured recommendation

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خاتمة مقنعة وغير قطعية

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